Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space

This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.

Man in space.jpg

A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milkyway. He watches the stars around him.  Suddenly he looks back at his ship and he sees that there is big hole in it. He knows that it's going to be a big fix up.

He quickly make his way back to the ship where the repair kit waits. Everything he will need to fix it is in there. It took him 2 hours to fix it.

The next thing he knew an alien was coming out from the corner of the ship. The alien had a red body, 3 eyes, 4 arms and 3 fingers on each hand.

The  Astronaut was afraid that the alien get killed. He ran into the ship and the  alien said do you want to play with me.The Astronaut said I fort you were going to kill me.He came out of his ship and of cos I will play with you.

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