Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 5 July 2017

Life Journey

Life Journey

Today my speech is about life Journey,Life is a journey filled with lessons, hardships, and joys, celebrations and special moments that will ultimately lead us to our destination, our purpose in life. The road will not always be smooth in fact, throughout our travels, we will encounter many challenges in our life.

Some of these challenges will test our courage, strengths, weaknesses, and faith. Along the way, we may stumble upon obstacles that will come between the paths that we are destined to take. In order to follow the right path, we must overcome these obstacles. Sometimes these obstacles are really blessings to disguise, only we don't realize that at the time.

Time stops for no one, and if we allow ourselves to focus on the negative thing we might miss out on some really amazing things that life has to offer. We can't go back to the past, we can only take the lessons that we have learned and the experiences that we have gained from it and move on. It is because of the heartaches, as well as the hardships, that in the end help to make us a stronger person.

The people that we meet on our journey, are people that we are destined to meet. Everybody comes into our lives for some reason or another and we don't always know their purpose until it is too late. They all play some kind of role. Some may stay for a lifetime; others may only stay for a short while.

People will come and go into our lives quickly, but sometimes we are lucky to meet that one special person that will stay in our hearts forever no matter what. Even though we may not always end up being with that person and they may not always stay in our life for as long as we like, the lessons that we have learned from them and the experiences that we have gained from meeting that person, will stay with us forever.








Tuesday, 28 February 2017

Explanation template

My Idea of a Fun Weekend

Today i’m going to show you what my ideas of a fun weekend.

The first thing I’ll do for a fun weekend is to watch movie eat popcorn.The movies I’ll watch is Scary Movie 2 and Don’t  Breathe.The thing that I like about these movies is that they can scare your friends. Why I chose these movies is that I like to watch them once a day.

The second thing i’ll do is go to the park with my friends.The thing why I think that this is a good idea is that I like to play with my friend all the time.

Third of all I’ll like to go to Rainbows End with my family.The thing why I chose this because I like to spend time with my family.Why Rainbows End is my best idea cause in the holiday I went to rainbows end with all my cousins that live in kiakohe.

What would you do for a fun weekend that you can do with your family.


WALT - Plan for a  piece of explanation writing.





Tuesday, 14 February 2017

Explanation template

Why do people need to drink water


Today I’m going to  explain about why people need to drink water
And what it does to make a healthy body.

The reason why we need to drink water is that sometimes in can come up to sickness and you can get breast cancer.

Most people drink water to keep their bodies healthy from the inside and the outside and it help with oxygen and keep use fit and strong.

The reason why we need to drink water is that sometime you get lazy,tired,unhappy and angry.

Here's what happens to your body when you don't drink enough water. Water is essential for human life. It accounts for for 50-70% of our body weight and is crucial for most bodily functions. Any deficit in normal body water.

The thing that I want all of us to do is to drink lot of water and healthy food that don’t eat sugar.

This is my little story of Why do people need to drink water.I hope you enjoyed my story of being healthy.

Friday, 14 October 2016

Olympic Games

On Thursday 13th October we had our Olympic games.My favourite part was when we done tagger pull. There was all sorts of games to play and we won all our games by working as a team.Most of the kids in my team were trying to get us some point to win the hole Olympic games.The first game we started for the day was handball.The rules for that game is that you can't holed the ball for over 3 second if you do it's the other teams ball.

The second one was volleyball that was the funnies one because I kept on falling on the ground and missing the ball.I like the part when you hit the ball and it goes over the net.

There was a lot of games to play, mostly I didn't jump in to play I was just standing and watching as my team was winning.

The most thing I like about the day was when we where doing the Olympic rings and the colour I was holding was blue and the other one was dodge ball that was the only one I would only join.

Saturday, 17 September 2016

Narrative Bush walk

One morning when my mum was thinking in her head that she wanted to go bush walking today.
My three brothers and sister was thinking of that to but not me. Cause I'm afraid that their might be spiders and by the way brothers and my only sister,their names are Joseph,Rahiri,Hosea and Te pearu.I love my sister the most so we had to go,I got changed.


” Why do we have to go bush walking today?" I asked.

"No we're going for a bush walk or not if you don’t want to come then you can stay home and clean the house."

My mum always says that but if I don’t clean the house I’ll be in good trouble. Then I’ll not be allowed to play outside.


The next day when the house was clean my mum was Sooo!!! sick it was like she had a cold.Two week after that my mum was getting better.I was talking to my mum and say that my siblings where play the games and it felt like I was their slave.

After that she wanted to got for another bush walk so I went so that I don't have to clean the house.So I promised my mum that I will go for a bush walk for now. This is how life is going to be know going for bush walks everyday.

This team we are are writing about going for a bush walk and make up a story about going for a bush walk with our family.

Thursday, 25 August 2016

Compound Sentence

 1.I went to the shop to get some milk but I lost my money.

2.I saw a cat running down the road looking for some food to eat.

3.I saw a little rat in the hole and it ran out eating the cheese.




Tuesday, 2 August 2016

Olympic torch

The olympic torch is what people light up and go around the world. The olympic torch has wavy squiggly line with lots of colours in side. The squiggly line go thick to thin and every year they light up the torch. The olympic lights turn on we they light it up.

The colours inside the torch has Green,Light blue, dark blue, Darker blue and black..Outside of the torch the colour is silver and in the center of the torch is light silver and on the top of the torch near the flame it has 2016 olympic rings there are 5 olympic rings.The 2016 olympic games start on 6 August.

Thursday, 21 July 2016

Stuart Farquhar

Rio will be Stuart's fourth Olympic Games having competing at Athens 2004, Beijing 2008 and London 2012 with a best placing of ninth in London.
He has competed at five IAAF World Championships since 2007 with a best result of ninth at Moscow 2013.
Stuart is originally from Te Aroha but now lives in Hamilton. He is married to Leone and has two sons and a daughter. He works part time in IT.
Stuart competes for the Hamilton City Hawks club and has been coached by Athletics NZ High Performance Programme coach Debbie Strange since he started throwing javelin.Stuart Farquhar birth place was in Te Aroha - Born in 1982 and Height is 187cm

Lauren Boyle

Lauren Boyle is set to become just the fourth Kiwi swimmer to attend three Olympic Games. Her best Olympic result so far was a brilliant fourth placing in the 800m freestyle final in London 2012.
For graduate from the University of California (Berkeley) in Business, she has competed at three Commonwealth Games (2006, 2010 and 2014), winning relay medals in 2006 and 2010 leading to a gold medal in the 400m freestyle and a silver medal in the 800m freestyle at Glasgow in 2014.
The thing why i'm writing about Lauren Boyle is that I wanna be just like her and come first in all my games.

Friday, 10 June 2016

Thursday, 9 June 2016

Will he save her

Batman was riding on his bike down the street to see if there were some bad people around here. But instead he saw Joker robbing the bank,Batman jumped off his bike and ran into the back to see what was happening. Joker said don’t take one more step or this lady will die,Joker asked what her name and she said Alla, Alla Balla and Joker said again or Alla Balla will die.Joker diapered himself onto the tower and Batman said get back over here or you're going to get it.Batman flied up to the tower nearby where joker was.Joker and Batman Started to fight until joker frowe one of his bom and it hit Alla Balla she was standing by the edge of the tower and the bomb hit her and she fall off.Batman jumped off
As well  just to save Alla Balla from hitting the ground until he catch her and she said thank you for saving my life.Everything went back to normal joker went to gail and Batman was saving the world from evil villains and Alla Balla was working at the bank.



Walt: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

Wednesday, 1 June 2016

Super Hero

Every time when lady bug watches the new and something happens she always goes and help.When people are sad there is this man how lives in a cage and he has these butterfly's  that are speared around he grabs one of them and turn them into evil butterfly's and they fly out the window and to the sad person.Lady bug got this magic yo yo that can turn the evil butterfly back to a normal one.No one know who is under the mursc but only lady bug sister.

Tuesday, 17 May 2016

W3T2 Dictogloss


Superman is the most powerful being on planet Earth, an alien immigrant named Kal-El from the planet Krypton, who was raised in Small ville, Kansas, to become an American superhero. Raised with high moral ideals, he uses his incredible strength, speed, flight and various other superpowers to fight evil and protect the innocent. In his civilian identity he is Clark Kent, a mild-mannered reporter working for the Daily Planet in Metropolis. He is a founding member of the Justice League of America and a charter member of the Legion of Super-Heroes in the 30th Century

This term we are learning about superHeros,Way I have highlighted some of the words is that I forgot some of it.

Thursday, 12 May 2016

Onomatopoeia

Immersion Assembly


Has your teachers made you laugh before,well our teacher have .This term we are learning about as I see it.as I see it is about art,your favourite things,seasons,building ,comic and the four wakes.Well the first team that I am going to talk about is team 1.Team 1 are learning about there favourite things.On the first day of school the kids came to the hall and Mrs Nua was talking about the kid coming back and she said the first team on screen is team 1.They showed us a video of the teachers and there favourite thing.The next team was team 2.Team 2 are learning about seasons.Next team was team 3 they are learning about building mini house.Then my team of course team 4 we are learning about comic books and we might be making one and last of all team 5 .team 5 they are learning about the four wakes.This is what Pt England school are doing this team.


Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Year ⅚ Camp Blog Comments


Blog URL :  
Write 1-2 sentences (In your OWN words) about something you liked in their blog post.
Write 1-2 sentences describing WHY you liked that part of their post.
I liked how gwynn was talking about the camp and the games they done in the hall.
I liked the part of the games that they played in the hall cause when I was there I didn’t forget to go on the rollerblades
I like how Tehillah done her camp post and she listed what she done
I liked the part when tehillah was doing cooking with mrs garden cause when the girls from kindonators got to eat some
I Liked Deavays camp blog post because he was talking all about what he done at camp he might of had fun their
I liked the part when Deavey was making bread cause the boys in my team they were all missy  like there was flour all over them.
I liked Aneelis’s camp post because the games she done with her camp group like top town and the other games
I like the part when Aneelis was playing top town that was called kill Zone. My team won at that game but the other team got the same points as us
My favorite part of stacey camp writing was when she forgot to watch all the performs that people performed in the hall
My favirote part of the Performances was kind krushers,that was the only on that I liked out of all of them.

Tuesday, 5 April 2016

Hook'd on camp

1.  I liked making circles and we went swimming at the beach.
2. amazing race was we had to go around the school.
3. camp performing is when team 4 had to perform on the stage group by group.
4.cook group we had to make cookies for the whole team.

5.On the first night of camp the camp team watched movies.

The hook I am going to use is: Vivid Description

This term the five and six had camping at school.The first day we had to go to the hall and our teacher will tell us what our first rotation was. ,my team for camp was kinbonators. Our first rotation we top town with mr Jacobsen,First we had to do was to start at the platform and make our way to the water balloons with the board's. We had to throw the water balloons at the other team and one got hit with the balloon on the stomach. The next done at top town we done was this thing that we done with wood and it had a cut hose on it and you had to put your feet in it and walk along the electric eels and if you fall over you had to start again, after that we had to go under the tunnel it was a tarpaulin that we had to go under and the first one at the tarpaulin as to lift it up so the people can go under, Next you had to run to the gumboot throwing and line up and you had try hit the platform and if you hit it you get a point We were the first ones to finish. After that we had to go to the sponges and their were two bucket one was fulled of water and the other wasn't because we had to get all the water out of the bucket and put it in the other bucket and we all had to race back to where we started and the kindonator won but the other group got the same points as us so it was the same so we all won.



Thursday, 17 March 2016

Volcano Narrative

Have you ever heard about volcano, like how they erupted and lava comes out from the top?   Sometimes a volcano erupts simply because he is in love.

Hook Practice